AD review of draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control-02

From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
Date: Thu, 9 Dec 2021 21:46:58 +0000
To: "draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control@ietf.org>, "ietf-http-wg@w3.org" <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
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Thank you for the work on this document.

I only have two minor comments, please address them at the same time as the Last Call comments.

I have opened a github issue with this text: Received on Thursday,  9 December 2021 21:47:14 UTC

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